tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1069226113170320308.post2422089644664564784..comments2010-02-09T16:41:40.080-05:00Comments on From the Tower: Project 2Deannahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02431745897082914461noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1069226113170320308.post-21567369790566434972008-07-10T05:37:00.000-04:002008-07-10T05:37:00.000-04:00On a second run through I'd like to say that takin...On a second run through I'd like to say that taking another step back might be a good idea.<BR/><BR/>Though the fact that you didn't take a larger shot of the event implies that you want a feeling of closeness and containment.<BR/><BR/>Actually strike that first statement. I like it better without a wider shot.Daniel Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00519004194262160775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1069226113170320308.post-27161488861455025682008-07-10T05:32:00.000-04:002008-07-10T05:32:00.000-04:00I'm gonna get all nerdy and such, because I've bee...I'm gonna get all nerdy and such, because I've been doing nothing but documentary work for that whole newspapery thing. *waves hands at the past*<BR/><BR/>Anyhow. This was done well. Choosing pictures from the pool was a great decision. Makes the set feel very cohesive. You also include a wide variety of emotions and actions. You weren't afraid to go close which is too often the fist misstep of any documentary photographer. And you took a step back when nessicary. All in all nicely done. I'll stop nerding out now.Daniel Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00519004194262160775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1069226113170320308.post-71956797338331489062008-07-07T02:25:00.000-04:002008-07-07T02:25:00.000-04:00I like the first, second, and last pictures best. ...I like the first, second, and last pictures best. If you want a thorough critique, let me know (though I'm not the most qualified for critiquing photographs, I can still give input).<BR/><BR/>Otherwise, the whole theme/set thing you intended came out very well. Coincidental?Le Reveurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09335834120681216803noreply@blogger.com